Dear Students
as agreed, our stakeholder gave us feedback from your Define Stahe pitch:
" I missed the talk hence I apologize in advance for any misunderstanding or confusion. In your case, most of the talk is structured by bullets and for sure I’m missing important bits of information.
Well done: Overall, the talk is very good and very well structured with clear identification of the problematics and their potential solutions. The design and reading of the talk is also very good. As it is, it can be easily adapted for public and company presentations.
To improve: I think the presentation missed who is the target audience and the main challenges for the transition to sustainable cities. Who are the key stakeholders and who will benefit more? Maybe add a couple of slides on the end identifying who are the decision-makers and what arguments can be used to convinced them on the benefits of a greener city."We hope this could be useful for your Ideation/Prototype stages
See you tomorrow
Helena and Ricardo