Dear students
This is our stakeholder feedback about your ppt presentation::
ILL 10
Please see my comments below. Because I missed the talk I apologize in advance for any misunderstanding or confusion.
Well done: Overall, this is a good and well structured talk. This project presents a great summary on what are the green-roofs and what are they for. More, the types of green-roofs and their implementation is also clearly presented. As example of this, slide 6 presents a great summary of why green-roofs are a nature-based solution with several positive effects on people and nature.
To improve: The introductory slides seem to be focusing mainly on the warming of cities due to biodiversity loss. I think this talk would benefit to shorten this information bit to a single slide. On the other hand, I think that one of the first slides should focus on stating clearly what is the problematic, i.e., why do cities need biodiversity? This slide should clearly indicate the biodiversity benefits’ to cities from climate and water regulation to a vast array of ecosystem services.
See you in a whileHelena & Ana